Style sheets & feedback

Today we had feedback on our style sheets. The general vibe was good although we still have a few things to improve on.

Our style sheet featured a scene from the start of the FMV as the main character is sleeping in bed shadowy tentacles creep out from underneath the bed to drag him off into a nightmae world.

First render, no textures or lights.

Second render, added some lights.

Final render, the style sheet we showed today.

The feedback we had was to define the tentacles more. Research tentacles to make ours more recognizable.

Consider the light source, maybe add a window. Possibly add light to the lamp on the desk.

Continue to work with the subtle palette but to have more variation on the colours and textures.

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